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B. Eldon Calder's avatar

I believe that the pacing and rhythm of the syntax are perfectly aligned here: thoughts curling into thoughts, into more paranoid, yet self-aware thoughts. Nothing is wasted. Excellent work, Morgan.

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Morgan Beatty's avatar

It's the case that I appreciate this!

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Anton's avatar

This piece felt raw and electric—like a moment suspended between vulnerability and revelation. Your writing captures that tangled, human feeling of being seen and still unsure. Beautifully done.

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Wow, what a fun read that was!

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