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This scene felt real, you offer the reader no hand-holding, and the dialogue jumps between a few conversations at once, like living and breathing it. I don't know if I've just missed a whole load of backstory, but this can stand-alone despite it. I love your writing style.

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Thank you! If you'd like to read other chapters, here's the table of contents: https://morganbeatty.substack.com/p/the-futureness-table-of-contents

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